One night I went to my bed Room
l walk in my room l went On my
Bed l here Noise from my bed.
It was under the bed l was crawling Down
the bed I Looked.
At a book ti wasn't a book it
Was a dinosaurs book when I Open.
The dinosaurs book all of the dinosaurs
went out of a book.
Heaps of Dinosaurs went on my
Wall and they run all a round
and the Dinosaurs were make
So Munch Noise l can’t Even. Sleep put
they went all Back
in the Magic book and l can Seep
After for school.
When it was Morning
Me and my mum went in the Car.
She Take me at School they I
Went in my Class they and my class were
dowing Reading.
Hi my name is Kayden from Karoro School and I find that your writing is very interesting. Next time check that you spelt your words properly and make sure your sentences make sense. I liked the part when the dinosaurs go out of the book. Here is a link to my blog. karorokaydenf.blogspot.com.
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